Extra Credit in for Paper 1

I went to the writing center today. I had my paper reviewed by Kristen Shepard.

Introduction of Paper #1

Do you find yourself inside and bored on a gloomy day? All it takes to rid yourself of that boredom is logging on to Second Life. In Second Life there are many forms of entertainment that can keep you occupied. Get on your computer, log on to Second Life and let your journey begin. Entertainment inside a virtual world, like going to clubs, watching movies, and attending sporting events, is a very enjoyable way to spend your free time.